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  • Oct 13, 2013, 08:41 PM
    Abc321ab
    Need a tag line for my cleaning business please help
    This is a residential and commercial cleaning company.. The name of the company is True Sparkle cleaning. The only tag lines I thought of were:
    1.cleaning made easy.
    2. Where your cleaning needs come true.
    Can you please help me with a better line/slogan? Thanks
  • Oct 13, 2013, 08:53 PM
    Wondergirl
    Gleam and glow -- that's how you'll know.
    We'll dazzle you!
  • Oct 13, 2013, 08:54 PM
    Abc321ab
    What do you think of the ones I mentioned?
  • Oct 13, 2013, 08:58 PM
    Wondergirl
    Not at all catchy or memorable. You need a tag line that connects with and reminds a person of "sparkle" -- like, "Oh, yeah, that Sparkle cleaning company."
  • Oct 13, 2013, 08:59 PM
    Abc321ab
    If this was your company what would be your tagline?
  • Oct 13, 2013, 09:02 PM
    Wondergirl
    We'll dazzle you!
  • Oct 14, 2013, 07:16 AM
    Abc321ab
    What about the ones I came up with?
    The other sparkle is In your eye
    It's all we leave behind
    We stand behind our sparkle
    The sparkle to count on
    Our name is our promise
    We outsparkle the rest
    We dazzle your wold
  • Oct 14, 2013, 07:29 AM
    Wondergirl
    Whatever works for you. It needs to be short and punchy and memorable. If I were you, I'd make a list of your favorites and pas it out to strangers, friends, and family members as a "check your favorite tag line" survey.

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