Intro: Friends are my best treasures.
Body: Why do I consider my friends as treasures?
What did they they do to make me happy?
Ending: friends make me feel like I'm in heaven.


This is only I can think of:
"Friends are my best treasures because they are valuable and also irreplaceable..."

You can do it. We'll help you after you post your attempt.

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Originally Posted by teacherjenn4

You can do it. We'll help you after you post your attempt.

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Sorry to disappoint you, but I don't know what it feels to have a friend cause I'm always alone in school, home or other places I go to. Yeah, I'm a loner, I accept that. So I can't really think of anything... :(

I'm sorry, but the rules of this site do not permit us to do your homework.

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Originally Posted by john_dave1225

sorry to disappoint you, but I don't know what it feels to have a friend cause I'm always alone in school, home or other places I go to. Yeah, I'm a loner, I accept that. So I can't really think of anything...:(

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Friends don't do your work for you. We're here to help, but you must do your best first. Then, we'll be able to help you.

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Originally Posted by teacherjenn4

Friends don't do your work for you. We're here to help, but you must do your best first. Then, we'll be able to help you.

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OK... here's my sentence.(
Friends are my best treasures.I also consider them as gifts, and I treasure them because they make me happy. A good friend is one you can talk to about anything on your mind. Friends help you get through tough times, and they lighten up your mood when you're down.

Does this answer the question of the body part?. What about the grammar, is this grammatically correct?. And also, is this good for 1 minute?

Friends do not make a person happy. The person has to already be his own best friend. What role do friends play in the life of a person who is secure and has great self esteem? Think about that.

... as an outline of a homework project... teacher is not going to wording changed.. [/

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Originally Posted by N0help4u

.....as an outline of a homework project ....teacher is not going to wording changed ..[/

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What do you mean by "teacher is not going to wording changed?" This doesn't make sense.

Should say teacher is probably not going to accept wording change because wondergirl 'corrected' the outline statement .

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Originally Posted by N0help4u

Should say teacher is probably not going to accept wording change because wondergirl 'corrected' the outline statement .

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Or maybe she will delight in the fact that a student thinks beyond the assignment.

Possibly