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  • Jul 17, 2013, 05:11 PM
    Jasminequick
    Can someone HELP me write a song?
    Well I write songs, literally all the time.
    But the only thing I can seem to write is love songs and break up songs and things of that nature.
    I'm 13
    And well, I'm recording a CD soon.
    And I don't want all of the songs to be love songs.
    Cause well, honestly I don't want to be classified as another Taylor Swift.
    I've been trying to write this song for so long but I'll get a few lines and then it goes downhill after that.
    But this is kind of what I want it to be about:
    Around 7 months ago I moved into a new house and a new neighborhood.
    And every weekend the whole community would get together at the marina, cook out, sing karaoke, and have a good time.
    It had became my entire life.
    I made so many friends who meant the world to me and met so many good people, who became like family.
    I loved being there more than anywhere else.
    Then my father built a building for the man who owned everything down there.
    And he ended up being a crook.
    And owed my dad thousand of dollars.
    So the following weekend my dad "quit" the job after he wouldn't pay.
    My dad asked him if it was okay if I could still come to the marina.
    And the man said "Well with the way things are, she probably shouldn't"
    I had already went in and everything.
    Then my dad motioned for us to leave.
    And my heart broke.
    I cried and cried every weekend for a long time.
    And I haven't got to go back since.
    And I miss it.
    I looked forward to it every weekend.
    And it wasn't my fault.
    And it's just sad.
    But this is what I have for the beginning.:

    Everything was perfect
    Those days were so beautiful.
    Everything was amazing
    Before I lost it all.

    So if you could help that would be great. (:
    And if I end up putting it on my CD, if you give me your name, I will give you credit.
    Thanks!
  • Jul 17, 2013, 05:16 PM
    Alty
    Song writing isn't free. It also takes a lot of work, especially when it comes to writing a song for someone else about something specific.

    Those that can write songs, want more than just their name on a possible CD sometime in the future. They expect to get paid for their efforts upfront.

    You may have to hire a song writer if you can't find a way to write this song by yourself.

    Good luck.

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