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  • Nov 17, 2012, 12:05 AM
    jessica_ramos
    I am trying to make a flowery and somehow poetic introduction, does this fit?
    I want to make a very short opening statement in a poetic or indirect way. Its about a paper work about political philosophy. Thanks;)
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    Any kind of government cannot support any tolerance of faith if that republic employs those men favoring one. Their views, therefore, would be inevitable to conform to their faith which will indirectly show its hostility towards any religious system aside from theirs.
  • Nov 17, 2012, 12:30 AM
    Wondergirl
    How about --

    No government that claims to embrace any faith can allow elected officials to favor and promote a particular one. Their biases, therefore, would inevitably cause their faith to be hostile to any belief that is not theirs.

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