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  • Oct 26, 2012, 02:41 PM
    FanFatale
    Is this any good?
    I can feel the pain in her words
    A victim of the fame
    I can feel it so hard that it hurts
    She had lost in the game
    Lost the fire in her eyes for so long
    How could she be so strong to survive?

    CHORUS:

    I admire her
    She's tough enough to survive
    Like the strongest woman alive
    But yet, everybody judges her
    They didn't learn anything from the past
    For them it's nothing more then just a test
    But she survived
    She survived

    People don't know she lived a nightmare
    And we agree that wasn't fair
    Wakin' up in a darkness every day
    I guess there's only one way...
    Which is to fight for our life
    This is how we survive,
    How she survived

    I admire her
    She's tough enough to survive
    Like the strongest woman alive
    But yet, everybody judges her
    They didn't learn anything from the past
    For them it's nothing more then just a test
    But she survived
    She survived

    BRIDGE:

    What if she gave up?
    We would've lost another star
    She would've been too far
    When will you learn?
    ...
    She's just like us
    And that's why I admire her


    I don't know, I need somebody's opinion.
    Please note that I'm still studying English
  • Oct 26, 2012, 02:57 PM
    Alty
    I like it. I'd love to hear it with music. :)
  • Oct 26, 2012, 03:00 PM
    FanFatale
    I would love to have it in a balled, don't know mid-temp or slow,
  • Oct 26, 2012, 03:15 PM
    Alty
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by FanFatale View Post
    I would love to have it in a balled, don't know mid-temp or slow,

    When it comes to music I know what I like, and I know what I hate, but I can't really help you with the actual tempo, unless you want to hear it accompanied by an accordion. Yes, I play the accordion. Don't judge, my parents made me.

    Either way, the lyrics I like. I'm sure you'll come up with the music, you came this far, so take the next step. If it's produced let me know, I'll buy a copy. :)

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