Originally Posted by
joypulv
The letter should be very short. Just
Dear _____,
We would like permission to raise funds from the public outside your store for our charity, _____________. We will have a table 3' x 6' and five students and one adult, for 6 hours each Saturday between October 1 and November 10.
Sincerely,
You, with phone number and email
One adult, same info
Tax exempt ID number
For small local stores that aren't chains, ask in person, being as charming and pleasant as you can be, and hand over the letter at the end. Even chain stores might have managers who can make the decision, so try there in person too.