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  • Jul 10, 2012, 04:27 AM
    tigger13
    Revision of sentences
    I love horror movies,but Kayla shivers just thinking of them. Clearly, I enjoy seeing these films more than her.
  • Jul 10, 2012, 04:32 AM
    Curlyben
    WHat sort of revision are you looking for ?
  • Jul 10, 2012, 04:55 AM
    tigger13
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Curlyben View Post
    WHat sort of revision are you looking for ?
    I'm looking for the best revsion for business and can you use she instead of her at the end of a sentence

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