tell me what you think about my song please judge
OK so this song was written about a year ago I was in my room with nothing to do and nowhere to go I really didn't leave except to eat and use the bathroom so I just became a bit crazy sitting in my white walled room I guess and wrote this it's based upon my minds illusion and metaphor enjoy
White walls
White walls are all around me
Drift away & take your soul
Darkness fades into light time
Evil souls here are mine
Sittin' Here in the courtyard
watching you pass by me
White walls take your soul again
Here I come fading passed
Chorus
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These white walls they enclose me
keep me sane through the day
Cloudy sky's bring in the rain
The parasite attacks my brain
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Guitar solo/Short
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Shadows of Blue & Gray
Attach Their prey
Craziness lurks around me
Driving me insane
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Chorus
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White walls control the system
Create the taxes we pay
Should I wait a lonely lifetime
Or go with the day
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Chorus
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X4 White Walls , Oh White Walls