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  • May 16, 2012, 10:42 PM
    TheAbyssBand
    tell me what you think about my song please judge
    OK so this song was written about a year ago I was in my room with nothing to do and nowhere to go I really didn't leave except to eat and use the bathroom so I just became a bit crazy sitting in my white walled room I guess and wrote this it's based upon my minds illusion and metaphor enjoy


    White walls


    White walls are all around me

    Drift away & take your soul

    Darkness fades into light time

    Evil souls here are mine


    Sittin' Here in the courtyard

    watching you pass by me

    White walls take your soul again

    Here I come fading passed

    Chorus
    _________________

    These white walls they enclose me

    keep me sane through the day

    Cloudy sky's bring in the rain

    The parasite attacks my brain
    ________________________

    Guitar solo/Short
    ________________________

    Shadows of Blue & Gray

    Attach Their prey

    Craziness lurks around me

    Driving me insane
    ______________
    Chorus
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    White walls control the system

    Create the taxes we pay

    Should I wait a lonely lifetime

    Or go with the day

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    Chorus
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    X4 White Walls , Oh White Walls

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