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  • May 16, 2012, 07:18 PM
    GypsieRayne
    Writing skills help desk
    Depends here also, because I have time on my hands and tend to get bored so I read more and find ways to occupy my time, even if that means finishing assignments ahead of schedule.

    How can this be rewritten?
  • May 16, 2012, 07:22 PM
    Wondergirl
    Did you compose that sentence? Or is it from a story or is an assignment? (It's a horrible sentence.)
  • May 16, 2012, 07:24 PM
    GypsieRayne
    YES I realize that. I start writing the way I think.. and revise but I can't revise this one.. that is why I asked for help.
    Thank You
  • May 16, 2012, 07:26 PM
    Wondergirl
    Is it part of an essay or story, or is it floating all alone somewhere?

    What is the context?
  • May 16, 2012, 07:29 PM
    GypsieRayne
    It is an answer to a discussion question assignment.

    This is the question:
    Are you the first to finish, but not necessarily the one turning in the most accurate work?

    This is my current answer:
    Depends here also, because I have time on my hands and tend to get bored so I read more and find ways to occupy my time, even if that means finishing assignments ahead of schedule.
  • May 16, 2012, 07:32 PM
    Wondergirl
    I can improve your answer, but it doesn't answer the question posed.
  • May 16, 2012, 07:35 PM
    GypsieRayne
    It neither really it is a discussion question in which we answer them in at least a sentence and build on it if possible
  • May 16, 2012, 07:36 PM
    Wondergirl
    You're not even on the right track!
  • May 16, 2012, 07:37 PM
    GypsieRayne
    Assignment dq
  • May 16, 2012, 07:40 PM
    Wondergirl
    There are actually two ideas presented --

    1) Are you the first to finish (or do you finish later)?

    2) If you finish early, how accurate is your work? Have you given it the attention it deserves? If you finish later, does that mean you have spent time ensuring your work is accurate?
  • May 16, 2012, 07:42 PM
    GypsieRayne
    It varies depending on the amount of time that I have as it varies from day to day depending on what has to be done in my daily life concerning my mothers estate,as she just passed away at the end of January of this year.
  • May 16, 2012, 07:47 PM
    Wondergirl
    And what about the accuracy and value of your work and how it fits with the speed you finish projects?
  • May 16, 2012, 07:50 PM
    GypsieRayne
    Normally, I am very accurate. Some things are harder for me to grasp than others.
  • May 16, 2012, 07:51 PM
    Wondergirl
    Accurate even when you finish quickly?
  • May 16, 2012, 07:55 PM
    GypsieRayne
    If it is a topic I am already familiar with then yes,but if not then honestly no.
  • May 16, 2012, 07:58 PM
    Wondergirl
    NOW answer the question you started with --

    Are you the first to finish, but not necessarily the one turning in the most accurate work?
  • May 16, 2012, 08:07 PM
    GypsieRayne
    Thank you for you time have a blessed night.
  • May 16, 2012, 08:08 PM
    Wondergirl
    What's your answer??
  • May 16, 2012, 08:15 PM
    GypsieRayne
    Normally, I am very accurate. Some things are harder for me to grasp than others. If it is a topic I am already familiar with then yes,but if not then honestly no.
  • May 16, 2012, 08:17 PM
    Wondergirl
    Yes what and no what? There are no antecedents.

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