Can you give me a thesis statement for the essay I'm writing... "what changed have you noticed I your neighborhood and how do you feel ?

Instead of "what changed have you noticed I your neighborhood and how do you feel ?", do you mean ""what changes have you noticed in your neighborhood and how do you feel about them?"

Well, I live in a neighborhood. There have been three major changes. I have both positive and negative feelings about them. But, wait! You don't live in my neighborhood, so these changes in my 'hood are not the same as the ones in your 'hood.

Should homeowners living in a neighborhood expect changes over time? How long have you lived in your 'hood? Are there positive changes in your 'hood? What are they? Are there negatives changes in your 'hood? What are they?

Now, write a thesis statement based on the above paragraph.

I meant to say what changes have you noticed in your neighborhood and how do you feel? And I wrote my whole essay I just need the thesis I don't know what to put .

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Originally Posted by chanla

I meant to say what changes have you noticed in your neighborhood and how do you feel? And I wrote my whole essay I just need the thesis I don't know what to put .

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Well, I haven't read your essay, so I have no clue what you should use as a thesis statement. Summarize your essay for me in five sentences, and I will tell you what your thesis is. Or post your essay here so I can read the whole thing.