My test is about sentence structure and I don't know how to use revision in a sentence.

I think you just did. Post it again with a minor change and you will have your second revision.

In a sentence that I did not know.

'The editor approved my fourth revision, so the manuscript goes to the publisher tomorrow.'

Hey thanks for the reddie. I was not joking, you did use the word and, if read my answer completely, you'd see how I used it. You did not ask how to write a sentence that used the word in a manner that also defines or explains the word. Joy gets a greenie from me for trying, hope you don't dump on her too.

(I gave you 2 greenies ballenger.. )

(Psssst. I gave him one also.)

TX guys, I am staying off homework help for now.There is a rash of reddie going on this week

Won't matter, ballenger. As long as this rating system is in place, you cannot outrun the reddies.

Yep, but I can spread greenies left and right

Were made out on this one