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  • Jan 29, 2007, 05:17 AM
    dommx430
    Lyrics I wrote
    Heyy people I'm dom from australia... I'm in a rap group aussie rap with me and a few other mates.. but the james a main member is currently in hospital after being stabbed 3 times and my other mate is locked up for at least 8 years for murder and my other mate has just got out of lock up.. like should I continue rapping or what.. here's a few bars of my rap's let me no what you think I just post some I don't want all of it on here just in case copyright..



    I sit back reminiscing about all the good times I’ve been missing…
    Is all this struggle and trouble worth the money.. life isn't fair
    Some will spend a mill’ on there wheels… while some don’t have a meal
    Overseas killings are regular…
    Could my lack of behavior be caused by this worlds unfairness…
    What a mess..

    Wake up thinking is all this struggle worth the money and trouble


    How much changes thinking about junior school… when you didn’t have to be cool….
    And today you get locked up for being in a fight… but overseas… there killing all night
    Thanks heaps dom
  • Jan 29, 2007, 07:34 AM
    RubyPitbull
    Sounds like a cohesive and thought provoking rap to me. I like it.

    Should you continue? Only you can answer that question. Do you have the fire in your belly to keep at it for years knowing that you might not ever hit it big but want to follow your dream anyway? Your answer to this should guide you.
  • Jan 29, 2007, 07:39 PM
    RubyPitbull
    I am transferring what you wrote to me privately into the posting as I told you I would.

    Quote:

    Originally Posted by dommx430
    thanks man... yeah well like i dont want too put everything into it becasue if i fail wat else can i do.. BUT i think i will becasue since ive started ive got alot better and i guess i can only get better ay.. thanks heaps man peace



    And to repeat what I said to you privately, you are quite welcome. Stay cool.

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