Let me know what you think please!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4gAk-y-R1iQ

It's not my kind of music, but I like the driving beat throughout. The vocals seemed pitchy (flat) during the first half, but then they smoothed out during the second half. I couldn't understand any of the words, but I guess that's the norm nowadays. The enthusiasm was definitely there. I'd give it a B+.