My best friend is moving and I made her an album with our best moments together. I'd like to write her something too, but I'm not good at composition. Could you give me some ideas, please?

What you wrote here is fine, and shows you know how to compose a reasonable sentence and express your thoughts well.

This is your best friend. He/she knows you better than you do.

Write your words and thoughts exactly how you would normally speak with your friend.

If you get help from someone else and write words or thoughts in a different manner than you would normally converse with your friend, in an effort to impress or other wise try to look better than an everyday conversation, your friend will pick up on it and know this is not you.

Your friend will be thrilled just getting the album, knowing how much time and effort you put in getting that together.

The last page can have a place you can write " I sure will miss having moments like these photos".

You can do this, you will be fine, and your friend will love whatever you write.

Tk, I wish I could give you a greenie. Excellent advice.

Lemon, I, too, think you will do fine by writing what is in your heart.

Is it a scrapbook or photo album?