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  • Nov 3, 2010, 05:31 PM
    Everold
    How does this thesis sound? The erroneous gist people get of Revivalism
  • Nov 3, 2010, 05:46 PM
    Fr_Chuck

    Personally sounds like poor grammar on the title.
  • Nov 3, 2010, 05:59 PM
    Wondergirl

    That's not a thesis statement nor is it grammatical.
  • Nov 3, 2010, 06:39 PM
    rosey11
    Comment on Wondergirl's post
    Gdog you could have corrected it and then gave them a good one
  • Nov 3, 2010, 06:40 PM
    rosey11
    I don't know what in the world your talking about but sounds good to me
  • Nov 3, 2010, 07:14 PM
    ScottGem

    Comment on Wondergirl's post
    Gdog you could have corrected it and then gave them a good one

    First, may I call your attention to the guidelines for using the comments feature found here:

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  • Nov 3, 2010, 07:14 PM
    Wondergirl

    Quote:

    Comment on Wondergirl's post
    Gdog you could have corrected it and then gave them a good one
    There's nothing to correct. The OP didn't even tackle his assignment correctly, and I'm certainly not going teach him about thesis statements or do his homework for him. He, like you, was supposed to learn that (and grammar) in school.

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