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  • Aug 16, 2010, 11:17 PM
    jezzeka888
    What do you honestly think of my poem?
    Someone anyone:

    Will someone, anyone,
    Kiss me until I can no longer breathe
    Embrace me in their arms,
    Clutch my face in their hands
    Kiss my tears away?

    Will someone, anyone,
    Laugh with me,
    Cry with me
    Pray for me,
    Pray to god, thanking him for a love so extreme, so real, so true, so honest, so exquisite
    A love they only discovered with me?

    Will someone, anyone,
    Stay with me for eternity
    Never let me go, never want to let me go,
    Accept my flaws, my defects,
    And see them as nothing more than the beauty that they truly are beneath the surface?
    Will that someone, anyone, please be you?

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