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  • Jul 19, 2010, 02:50 PM
    liffey
    Could someone write a song for me? Pleaser?
    Am 17 and I've been singing since I was 3. I really love to sing but I am not good at writing songs. I want to write a song about a dream I want to make true. I want to become a singer and many people don't believe in me, and I want to try to reach it even if I am alone.
    Something about that... (my thoughts are similar to the song The climb by Miley Cyrus... )
    Can anyone help me?
    I want to succeed in singing so much... because I think that's the only thing I am really good at.
  • Jul 19, 2010, 03:22 PM
    Strength89

    The best singers are those who sing from the heart. The best way to sing from the heart is to sing about things you have experienced and the best way to do that is to write your own songs.

    Start easy and write poems and slowly turn those poems in song lyrics.

    For example, if a guy broke your heart and you were sad for weeks but one day, you woke up and realized that he isn't worth it... you can write something like...

    And you, you broke my heart
    You took away from me, what I thought was the best part of me,
    You took yourself away and now,
    Now, I'm feeling all kinds of blue

    It seems as if the days drag on and on
    And it seems as if I'll never go on
    But you'll see, you'll see me shine on

    Because I realized, that you aren't who you said you are
    And I realized that you, you'll never be what you say you are
    And I, I realized that you, you'll never be the best for me

    Etc...

    Good luck!
  • Jul 20, 2010, 02:13 AM
    liffey

    Hey Strength89, thank you so much for help! I'll try to write something down. :D
  • Jul 20, 2010, 02:43 PM
    Clough
    Hi, liffey!

    What kind of lyrics have you already written, please?

    Thanks!
  • Jul 20, 2010, 02:55 PM
    liffey

    Don't leave me just silence
    I'm not good with it
    I'm trying to fed it with meaning
    I'm trying to give it a soul

    Breathe, just please don't be quiet
    Do it in a million different ways
    I will notice the difference
    Say at least a word
    Just don't depose eyes of me


    Don't leave me just silence
    Because then I'm trying to find what I want
    And I find what I never wanted to
    Silence is certainly not my friend

    Breathe, just please don't be quiet
    Do it in a million different ways
    I will notice the difference
    Say at least a word
    Just don't depose eyes of me

    Don't leave me the silence
    I'm begging you
    It's a huge space that wants to be full
    With tears, with nightmares...
    Don't do this to me in a moment of fragility
    Don't do this to me when I need to feel that everything will be fine...


    But that is really not good :( Could you try to repair my mistakes of something..
  • Jul 20, 2010, 02:55 PM
    liffey

    OR* something (sry)
  • Jul 20, 2010, 02:57 PM
    Clough
    When I'm on again, I'll take a look at it and make some recommendations to you.

    It's not easy right now for me to be on here...

    If you do a search for Clough with the words Write Song, you'll find how I've helped others with this same type of thing.

    Thanks!
  • Jul 23, 2010, 02:33 AM
    Clough
    Hmmm...

    Must be sure to remember about this one too!

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