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  • May 29, 2010, 07:33 PM
    troublemakerman
    My Poem, What do you think
    My mother passed 12/28/07. My wife JoAnn (Joey) passed 1/5/09 We were married over 46 years. All of a sudden I'm able to write poems. This poem was published in a local publication for Mothers Day.

    To My Joey And My Mother

    Mothers are a gift from the heavens above
    All through life they share their love
    Mothers are the greatest creation
    They are what they are and need no explanation
    From that first day starts a new life of love and joy
    They do anything to protect their baby girl or boy
    They walk around as proud as can be
    They want to shout look I have a life inside me
    Bigger and bigger she gets as time goes by
    Some suffer from pain and they cry
    There love is so strong that they can bear the pain
    They suffer and pray that it all was not in vain
    The greatest day on earth has come
    With some pain and pushing you are now a mom
    You have suffered a lot and sometimes cried
    But now it is over and with a baby at your side
    Now the easy part is over and your baby is here to stay
    You become a doctor a lawyer different people everyday
    You protect and raise them through the years
    With love joy and even some tears
    Now their grown and its time for them to leave
    You think back over the years while you grieve
    Even thou they are gone and hardly call you
    They may not write but they do love you
    Mothers belong on a pedestal with the word rare
    From the first day till the last they always care
    Mothers are and will always be
    The greatest any world will ever see
    When it is her time to go to heavens place
    She is sent back to earth wearing a new face
    Over and over a mother they be
    To give love to their new baby
    Back and forth from heaven to earth
    With love and joy and giving birth
    Mothers are not one of a kind
    They are all the same with love in mind
    With love in there heart from heaven they come
    Before you move on let me say I love you mom
  • May 30, 2010, 12:02 AM
    Clough
    Hi, troublemakerman!

    Great job on your poem! Did you also post it on the AARP site?

    My condolences on your losses!

    Thanks!
  • May 30, 2010, 04:48 AM
    troublemakerman

    Yes I posted it on the AARP site.
    Thank You!
  • May 31, 2010, 12:34 AM
    Clough
    Do you plan to do anymore writing like what you posted here, troublemakerman?
  • May 31, 2010, 04:22 AM
    troublemakerman
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Do you plan to do anymore writing like what you posted here, troublemakerman?

    Clough,
    I have written 7 other poems based on my wife and my feelings.
    Thank you for asking. Michael
  • May 31, 2010, 10:47 AM
    Clough
    Are any of the poems you've written like lyrics to a song? Perhaps you might want something you write to become a song with music?
  • May 31, 2010, 06:25 PM
    troublemakerman

    I never thought about it. I don't think so. Thank's.
  • Jun 1, 2010, 10:19 AM
    Clough
    Okay.
  • Jun 1, 2010, 10:31 AM
    mudweiser

    I loved this poem. I am going to share it with my friends!

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