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  • Mar 26, 2010, 09:07 AM
    SlyPhoenix
    I'm writing a paper for english and I need a creative way to rephrase this sentence
    Caught in mid thought, before she even had a chance, an arm wrapped around her from behind.

    It's obviously incorrect grammatically but I like the way it reads. Any suggestions?
  • Mar 26, 2010, 09:25 AM
    Blue Angel

    Maybe...

    “While caught in mid thought, she didn’t even have a chance to react as an arm wrapped around her from behind.”
  • Mar 26, 2010, 09:48 AM
    NomNomNoodles

    As she pondered (this word may not be appropriate depending on what's going on. "lost herself in thought"?), an arm suddenly wrapped around her from behind before she could even protest.
  • Mar 26, 2010, 09:51 AM
    SlyPhoenix

    I like both of those options. Thank you both
  • Mar 26, 2010, 12:01 PM
    Blue Angel

    You're very welcome.
  • Mar 26, 2010, 12:28 PM
    excon

    Hello sly:

    I like the way YOU wrote it. I never did like rules.

    excon

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