Hey everyone my name is ian and I am in the band "for the record" Invalid Friend ID band

I write songs and play drums but I want to know if my lyrics can truly take us to the next level, here is a song we are going to release soon let me know what you guys think.

"Don't forget"

Intro verse
This topic has lost all its luster
And I'm begging you don't forget <-backups
All the days when we were younger
Innocent and not conformed <-B
So just make me one promise
Don't ever change <-B
No don't ever for change

Main verse
I thought I was ready
But life said no you're not
It's a force to be reckoned with
And this force has just one plot

I thought I was hopeless
I knew I was afraid
Of how much of this money
I would be getting paid

Chorus
So who are you
Yea who are you <-B
You're in disguise
Think back to your youth

So who are you
Yea who are you <-B
You're innocent now
Just please tell the truth

Bridge (heavier sound)
Fix that hair<-B
Put on that tie<-B
Just so you can live a lie
How did we <-B
All end up here<-B
Did we forget <-B
Did anyone care

Alt Verse.
This feelings disrupting your breathing
Takes your breath away <-B
From the life you were living
Left in yesterday<-B
So do you feel all right (feel all right <-B)
Do you feel better now

Chorus
So who are you
Yea who are you <-B
You're in disguise
Think back to your youth

So who are you
Yea who are you <-B
You're innocent now
Just please tell the truth



Let me know
~ian

Yeah I'm very much into music, and those lyrics are actually as good as many I've listened to. Just need the right tune to go with them :)

All the backups are a little heavier but not to the point of screaming. Just heavier then the light main vocals.

Wow! Those lyrics are VERY good. I honestly don't see anything that needs changed and I really like the meaning of the song.

I think your listeners would be drawn in by what you are saying, and the fact that this song meant something to you really shows. Once you get it recorded you should give us a preview!

Hi, drinkmenow8!

So, is there actual music that goes with your lyrics, please?

Thanks!

Yea there will be That song was written because I took an internship in san jose and that song expresses how I feel, that song will be made and recorded probably sometime in January.

Thanks for the input.