Comparison and contrast essay

Because nursing may involve more education and may include extensive internships which requires commitment, I chose Social Science because its more hands on and does not require as many years of education.

First, your thesis is unclear and too wordy. Also, there are a few grammatical errors that need to be addressed (i.e. "its" should read "it's."

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