Im in a band I can play guitar but I can't write lyrics, can someone please write me a heavy metal song about killing, love and death or something?

Sorry, can't write lyrics about killing, love and death. What kind of combination is that anyway ?

Tick

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Originally Posted by tickle

sorry, can't write lyrics about killing, love and death. What kind of combination is that anyway ?

tick

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A strange combination. Can you write lyrics about dealing with death or something like that?

Why don't u just learn to write lyrics, start by writeing poems (sounds gay but it helps) here's a ryming web site FREE Online Rhyming Dictionary

Hey if you're still looking for lyrics I could send you some. Those topics happen to be mainly what I write about. If you're interested you can give me a shout Here's a sample of one of my lyrics just so you can get a taste to see if you like that style or not.

Shiver
This is my heart's last requiem
Cause all she does is think of him.
I just can't bear it
Ooh the pain I'd love to share it!

Now God and Hell conspire
While of her games I tire
Now that I've lost her to Sin
I will sure as hell blame him!

Chorus
Ohh Your ego I will bruise,
Your fate is one I choose,
Don't forget I've paid my dues,
Now your life is mine to lose!

Ooh and on my threats I will deliver,
As you clutch yourself and shiver
Boy you better think this through
Now spill your guts or I'll spill 'em for you

(Verse)
Now on this quest I shall not waver
For God blows the winds in my favor!
Ooh But I'm just Preaching to the choir…
(Extremely intense)
I'll still drown him in Hellfire!

The grass is your blanket
The ground is your keeper
Lie in your grave
And wait for the Reaper

(Chorus Repeat)

(Bridge)

How I envy the tears
That fall from your eyes,
Wishing to be them
Plunging to their demise


But enough with all this rigmarole
I'll just dig him a hole
Then I'll throw in the body
And maybe then he'll be sorry

(Chorus variation)
Your ego I will bruise,
Your fate is one I choose,
Don't forget I've paid my dues,
Now your life is mine to lose!

Ooh and on my threats I did deliver,
As you clutched yourself and shivered
Boy you should've thought this through
You didn't spill your guts so I spilled them for you

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Originally Posted by Jaydubaya

Hey if you're still looking for lyrics I could send you some. Those topics happen to be mainly what I write about. If you're interested you can give me a shout Here's a sample of one of my lyrics just so you can get a taste to see if you like that style or not.

Shiver
This is my heart’s last requiem
Cause all she does is think of him.
I just can’t bear it
Ooh the pain I’d love to share it!

Now God and Hell conspire
While of her games I tire
Now that I've lost her to Sin
I will sure as hell blame him!

Chorus
Ohh Your ego I will bruise,
Your fate is one I choose,
Don’t forget I’ve paid my dues,
Now your life is mine to lose!

Ooh and on my threats I will deliver,
As you clutch yourself and shiver
Boy you better think this through
Now spill your guts or I’ll spill ‘em for you

(Verse)
Now on this quest I shall not waver
For God blows the winds in my favor!
Ooh But I’m just Preaching to the choir…
(Extremely intense)
I’ll still drown him in Hellfire!

The grass is your blanket
The ground is your keeper
Lie in your grave
And wait for the Reaper

(Chorus Repeat)

(Bridge)

How I envy the tears
That fall from your eyes,
Wishing to be them
Plunging to their demise


But enough with all this rigmarole
I’ll just dig him a hole
Then I’ll throw in the body
And maybe then he’ll be sorry

(Chorus variation)
Your ego I will bruise,
Your fate is one I choose,
Don’t forget I’ve paid my dues,
Now your life is mine to lose!

Ooh and on my threats I did deliver,
As you clutched yourself and shivered
Boy you should’ve thought this through
You didn’t spill your guts so I spilled em for you

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SICK truly awesome!!

The best songs are always written on a subject the author knows... Therefore anyone can write Lyrics!