Some of my poems, what do you think. (first one is my favorite)
(this is a REDO I did of this poem after my daughter was born.. )
Like a shadow, like a dream
Like a feeling, A feeling in me
A feeling of love, Growing within
Life depends on the love that I Give
A child's cry, brings a smile to my face
A child, my child, crying in HIS grace.
The Lord lives on, as a feeling in me
Like a shadow, like a dream
(This is the original, I did it in high school, I was depressed and morbid and all that lovely teen stuff)
Like a shadow, like a dream
Like a feeling, a feeling of greed.
visions of demons dance through my head
The voices are there, dwelling within
With the down spiral of greed...
Like a shadow like a dream.
(and this is another one from my depressed teen mind :P)
Evil, its everywhere
In the halls, on the stairs
I look around, its in the air
Its in his breath, and in her hair
Its purpose; to make my life miserable
No more hiding, no more running
I am finished with this world
No more will I wish for his embrace
Or his calm voice
Love is undeniably unnessisary
And I don't have it
Sadly I continue, for I have found a friend
She is one of my own kind
Like me in many ways
She tells me she needs me
She tells me to live on
And I listen to her, I do live on
And as I reach to give my embrace
I realize in dismay
My new friend is nothing but a mirror.
