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  • Jul 8, 2009, 07:53 PM
    paigerwaiger94
    My new poem
    The above.


    I'm sorry my dear,
    But I had to go.
    I had no choice,
    But you must know.
    I couldn't leave,
    With out telling you,
    That I love you so.
    But you never knew.
    I hid my feelings,
    As long as I could.
    Now my name has been called,
    It will do no good.
    But like I said,
    I couldn't go,
    With out telling you first,
    What you must know.
    So now that I'm dying,
    I give you my love,
    And the promise that I'll be there,
    When you reach the above.


    -paige.
    Please, please, please, tell me what you think.
  • Jul 8, 2009, 10:00 PM
    elizabeth11

    I really like this poem.
  • Jul 9, 2009, 09:42 AM
    paigerwaiger94

    Thank you

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