Ok well I wrote this song so tell me what you think :) Also its about a girl who I like and her dad won't let me date her...


If I had it my way, We'd be so in love and You'd put your hands in mine
If I had it my way, We would run away and We'd leave this town behind
On the bad days, We would never fight, Cause we'd have the best in mind

We'd have sleepless nights, Watch the northern lights
We'll laugh at those who say we're unprepared, We won't let this trust
Take a hold of us we'll hold our fortunes close when things
Get hard to bare

Take a photograph but it won't be the last
Cause we'll have too much to share
And we'll make it through the things we have to do
And we'll stay strong when lifes unfair
And when we bine our hands when our lifes began
Then our story never ends, This kind of love is so divine
Please just keep my dream in mind

We'd have sleepless nights, Watch the northern lights
We'll laugh at those who say we're unprepared, We won't let this trust
Take a hold of us we'll hold our fortunes close when things
Get hard to bare

We'd have sleepless nights, Watch the northern lights
We'll laugh at those who say we're unprepared...

wow... have you thought of any music behide it?

I play bass guitar, but I can also do some chords on guitar, if u need help pm me =]

that's amazing :D

very well done =]

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Originally Posted by mackythehacker

wow... have you thought of any music behide it?

i play bass guitar, but i can also do some chords on guitar, if u need help pm me =]

thats amazing :D

very well done =]

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Thanks and yeah I play the guitar with it but nothing else really I'm about to post another song but its not finished but if you want you can help me finish it :cool:

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Originally Posted by TheRomanticDude

Thanks and yeah i play the guitar with it but nothing else really im about to post another song but its not finished but if you want you can help me finish it :cool:

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I'm not one for writing lyrics :$ lol

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Originally Posted by TheRomanticDude

Ok well i wrote this song so tell me what you think :) Also its about a girl who i like and her dad wont let me date her...

If i had it my way, We'd be so in love and You'd put your hands in mine
If i had it my way, We would run away and We'd leave this town behind
On the bad days, We would never fight, Cause we'd have the best in mind

We'd have sleepless nights, Watch the nothern lights
We'll laugh at those who say we're unprepared, We wont let this trust
Take a hold of us we'll hold our fortunes close when things
Get hard to bare

Take a photograph but it wont be the last
Cause we'll have to much to share
And we'll make it through the things we have to do
And we'll stay strong when lifes unfair
And when we bine our hands when our lifes began
Then our story never ends, This kind of love is so divine
Please just keep my dream in mind

We'd have sleepless nights, Watch the nothern lights
We'll laugh at those who say we're unprepared, We wont let this trust
Take a hold of us we'll hold our fortunes close when things
Get hard to bare

We'd have sleepless nights, Watch the nothern lights
We'll laugh at those who say we're unprepared...

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Hi, TheRomanticDude!

I hope that you don't mind, but I did redo some of your lyrics just a bit so that they'll go better with a melody.

If I had it my way, We'd be so in love that You'd put your hands in mine
If I had it my way, We would run away and We'd leave this town behind
If I had it my way, We would never fight, Cause we'd have the best in mind

I've already got a melody in my head for what you've written.

You've got some great and creative ideas here! It's definitely something with which a person can work!

One thing that's really important to writing songs is that there be some balance and agreement between the lines of the lyrics as far as the length of them.

Would you like to see how your song might be if it were set to music?

Thanks!