The heart melts away
When you love somebody
I know, I want to be with you, my darling.
The love sweeps away
When you don't love anymore.
I would like to love you more.
I love your hair,
I love your eyes,
I love the way you talk,
And when you giving me advice.
I love that perfume of yours.
I would love to be yours.
I loved the things we shared together.
I loved the places we've been together.
I love the things you do for me.
Thinking of me like nobody does.
I love you more.
Please give me another chance.

Please give me another chance
We can make things the same
Bring those happy days back again
All I need is just one chance

All the wonderful moments spent together
We could keep holding on forever
The moments spent in sun and rain
We can bring them back all again

I love you with all my heart
What I just can't do is part
Let us bring back our lost time
I promise everything will be fine

Let me hold you again
I’ll take away all your pain
All I ask is for another chance
Just look at me and give me a chance

You can trust me all right
I promise you never again will we fight
Forget the harsh words and come out of the dark moods
Show me your lovely smile
That same one at least for a while

Don’t break my heart
It’ll tear me apart
I can never ever leave you
Because I truly love you
Trust me again
Give me your hand
Deep inside I feel the pain
Of a broken heart that needs to be mend
Its only you who can heal
And change the way I feel

I know I’ve hurt you and made your heart pain too
Give me another chance
I’ll take away the darkness from your life

My heart aches if you cry
Please wipe those tears dry
I want to show you how much I care
I want you back at any cost
Our love cannot be come the past

Please, please let me try again
I can take away all your pain
All I ask is one more chance
Just a chance… A mere chance

Dose anyone think that this is sweet, lovely, kind and heart warming/touching?
If you don't think so.
Tell me what you suggest

That is great that your venting through writing. Did Clough help you with this?

I see it at that phase of after a break-up where you really want that person back, almost like a needy-ness. I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Sarah

Can anyone suggest a poem that tells a girl how much you love her?
Please something that is sweet, lovely, kind and heart warming/touching

It's always best if it's from the heart.

Sarah

Ok Mudweiser.
But have you got any suggestions?

Write one that doesn't rhyme -- a stream of consciousness poem, with thoughts and feelings just tumbling out.

I agree with wondergirl. Go outside, walk a little, be relaxed and thoughts will flow.

Just say what you want to say. Be original.

Sarah

Then how about this 1?

You are the angel whom I love
You call to me from heavens above
Without you I would die
Without you I will surely cry

You are my angel in the sky
Your halo shines so brightly
Your holy heart is as pure as gold
With you our love shall never go wrong

I hear you sometimes in the clouds singing a sweet song
Your wings lift me up to the sky
With you I can fly so high

My arms are lonely without you
My heart turns to stone
My emotion for you sweet angel
Is such a sweet devotion for you

It flows through me more than an oceon
The pain I feel inside without you is tearing me apart
I need your holy heart to ease my pain
For I want our love to remain

I need my angel to feel me
I need my angel to hold me once again
I need my angel to kiss me
I need my angel to love me

Angel save me from this pain
Please be with me once again.

What was her surname