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  • Jan 25, 2009, 05:12 PM
    austinmorgan
    Proposal letter
    I am in need of some help writing a business proposal letter to attorneys.
    I am a legal nurse consultant and need to contact attorneys for possible business and I don't know how to start my letter.
  • Jan 25, 2009, 05:17 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by austinmorgan View Post
    I am in need of some help writing a business proposal letter to attorneys.
    I am a legal nurse consultant and need to contact attorneys for possible business and I don't know how to start out my letter.

    You want a punchy, attention-getting first sentence, since attorneys get boring proposal letters all the time and probably toss most of them without reading past the first sentence.

    Could you write a few sentences to introduce yourself, and I will tweak. What will you do for them that they can't do for themselves?

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