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Scene 1 EXT
(Kid walking on sidewalk, ready for school, going to school. Passes the fence and walks inside school. As walking, we hear narrators voice.)
NARRATOR VOICE: The time I was caretaker in that Christian school has passed a long time ago. I had a good job, which paid well. But then there was this incident. And from there, everything changed.
Scene 2 INT
(Same kid opening locker and getting something from inside. Behind him are two boys)
BOY 1: (pointing at kid) Oh, look Charles. It is the new kid.
BOY 2: (looking in BOY 1 face) Oh yeah… Hope he won´t bring the cooties…
(Kid overhears it and turns around)
KID: (smiling) Willie is the name. How do you do?
BOY 1: (staring at Wille) Are you…
BOY 2: (terrified) Muslim?
KID: (surprised) No… Why?
BOY 2: So why don´t you have a cross around your neck?
BOY 1: You surely aren´t a good Christian.
BOY 2: Charles! Run!
(Boys run off and Willie looks surprised. He closes his locker and goes out of the door, heading towards the glass door.)
NARRATOR VOICE: Willie has been told by his new parents that the school was going to be Christian. But why did they leave out the fact, that it is a school full of Christian fanatics?
(We see kid walking towards stairs and up the stairs)
KIDS VOICE: Maybe they just didn’t want to terrify me… But they are Christians too… So why didn´t they tell me…
(closes the collar of his polo-shirt up so that nobody sees that he isn’t wearing a cross around his neck. Walks up to a random adult standing on the corridor. She is the principal, but the kid doesn´t know that)
KID: Hello, Miss.
PRINCIPAL: (arrogant) It´s Mrs. not Miss. What do you want?
KID: Could you direct me to my class? I think it is called…(pauses) Sekunda
PRINCIPAL: (snorts) Oh, you must be the new kid. (Pulls kid towards her and opens collar) What is this? I stressed that you will be wearing a cross. I even told your parents. 67 times, exactly!
KID: (surprised) Oh, I´m so sorry… (nervously) I left it by my bedside and –
PRINCIPAL: (interrupts kid) You put of your crucifix? You make me sick… Get out of here! Your class is that way! (Points)
