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  • Oct 23, 2008, 03:02 PM
    andyhaus1057
    Resume revising
    Hello,
    I'm applying for a large corporation next week and I need to make sure that my resume looks its best. Can you please help me edit it?

    Mark Kent
    [Contact information removed for privacy.]

    Education

    ITT Technical College

    Major: Applied Science
    Minor: Psychology
    Anticipated Graduation: December 2009

    Experience
    Forklift operator
    Kaskaskia Tool & Machine New Athens, IL February 2008 - Present
    • Lift and stack articles using a forklift
    • Log daily operations
    • Ensure that goods are properly stored
    Server
    Applebee's, Swansea, IL March 2005 – Feb 2006
    • Learned to work in team situations when working with fellow employees
    • Provided excellent customer relations
    • Responsible for overseeing daily operations of the restaurant

    Shift leader

    Dairy Queen, Freeburg, IL June 2000- Jan 2005
    • Counted money at the end of the night
    • Made sure all tasks were completed by employees
    • Customer escalation specialist

    Skills
    • Excellent organizational skills and high attention to detail
    • Self starter, ability to take initiative and fulfill responsibilities
    • Experienced with e-mail communication and the Internet for business information, research and presentation

    References Available Upon Request
  • Oct 23, 2008, 06:14 PM
    Clough

    Hi, andyhaus1057!

    Sure, I and/or others will be along to help you sometime. I did need to remove your contact information to protect your privacy. I appreciate your understanding with my having to do that. I would hate to have you get spammed a lot with things in the mail or in email because of all the contact information that you had in your post.

    Just looking after your best interests here!

    Later...
  • Oct 23, 2008, 06:30 PM
    Wondergirl

    Mark Kent
    Street
    City, State, Zip
    Phone
    E-mail Address

    Skills
    • Excellent organizational skills with high attention to detail
    • Self starter; takes initiative and fulfills responsibilities
    • Skillfully uses e-mail communication and the Internet to obtain business information, for research, and to create presentations

    Education
    ITT Technical College, City, State
    Anticipated Graduation: December 2009
    Major: Applied Science; Minor: Psychology

    Experience
    Forklift Operator, Kaskaskia Tool & Machine, New Athens, IL (February 2008 - Present)
    • Lifts and stacks articles with forklift
    • Logs daily operations
    • Ensures that goods are properly handled and stored

    Server, Applebee's, Swansea, IL (March 2005 – Feb 2006)
    • Worked in team situations with fellow employees
    • Provided excellent customer service
    • Oversaw daily operations of the restaurant

    Shift leader, Dairy Queen, Freeburg, IL (June 2000- Jan 2005)
    • Reconciled registers daily
    • Supervised [how many?] employees
    • Specialized in marketing and customer escalation

    References available upon request
  • Oct 28, 2008, 06:40 PM
    andyhaus1057
    Thank you for all of your help. You've been great! :)


    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    Mark Kent
    Street
    City, State, Zip
    Phone
    E-mail Address

    Skills
    • Excellent organizational skills with high attention to detail
    • Self starter; takes initiative and fulfills responsibilities
    • Skillfully uses e-mail communication and the Internet to obtain business information, for research, and to create presentations

    Education
    ITT Technical College, City, State
    Anticipated Graduation: December 2009
    Major: Applied Science; Minor: Psychology

    Experience
    Forklift Operator, Kaskaskia Tool & Machine, New Athens, IL (February 2008 - Present)
    • Lifts and stacks articles with forklift
    • Logs daily operations
    • Ensures that goods are properly handled and stored

    Server, Applebee’s, Swansea, IL (March 2005 – Feb 2006)
    • Worked in team situations with fellow employees
    • Provided excellent customer service
    • Oversaw daily operations of the restaurant

    Shift leader, Dairy Queen, Freeburg, IL (June 2000- Jan 2005)
    • Reconciled registers daily
    • Supervised [how many?] employees
    • Specialized in marketing and customer escalation

    References available upon request


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