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  • Oct 23, 2008, 07:55 AM
    nathan08
    My Songs
    Hey There's Two Of The Song's I Wrote. Probably The Best Two, So Can You Help Me Make It Good, Like Add A Few Things To It, Or Take Away, Ect. Thanks!




    jesus in the manger




    Girl I miss you, I always tell you offton enough, yeah girl I miss you,
    Wish I could take you back in my arms so girl I could kiss you,
    A million dollars don't amount to how much I love you, and I don't get why you left me,
    We were so good together just like gavin and stacey,
    I hope you miss me,
    I don't want to end up like k-fed and britney,
    So girl I hope you miss me

    Because I'm thinking of you
    I don't no what to do
    But you just shut me out
    Just shut the door
    Its like you don't want to see me anymore, no you don't want to see me anymore..

    (Chorus)
    So can someone tell me, should I waste time on you,
    You could be marryed, I wouldn't even have a clue
    But I no I have to find you, because that little voice in side my head said I have to,
    Yeah that little voice in side my head said I have to,
    So don't treat me like a stranger just remember when I use to hug you,
    Like mary did with jesus in the manger, just like jesus in the manger


    So where are you, please just give a little sigh
    We were meant to be, meant to be forever and always
    So tell me one thing are you in pain from what your causing
    Because when my heart brakes, I no that your heart brakes with me too
    But its like you isn't even got a clue now, so should I come find you
    The darkest night wouldn't stop me from seeing you,
    Your perfume lingers, so I no if I was getting any closer, and I really hope I am..

    (Chorus)
    So can someone tell me, should I waste time on you,
    You could be marryed I wouldn't even have a clue
    But I no I have to find you, because that little voice in side my head said I have to,
    Yeah that little voice in side my head said I have to,
    So don't treat me like a stranger just remember when I use to hug you.
    Like mary did with jesus in the manger, just like jesus in the manger




    ______




    mr right



    She got the charm of a angel she got a nicer arse than j lo,
    And I love the way her hair goes down to her ankle, and we get along so well,
    But now I see a change in her and I don't no what to say
    I don't want her to go away
    What did I do to deserve this (what did I do to deserve this)
    But..

    (Chorus)
    I think that she found a new mr right, right, (mr right, right)
    And all my friends say she left because I acted like napoleon dynamite, (napoleon dynamite), but there's just one thing you see I wish it could go back to just her and me
    Because I love that girl unconditionally,
    And its times like this I hope she still thinks of me, (thinks of me)

    Now tonight is the night of the prom night,
    And I have to get her back, I really hve to get her back,
    Because my heart don't tell me lie's
    That man she's with I do despise, it brings tears to my eyes,
    But..

    (Chorus)
    I think that she found a new mr right, right, (mr right, right)
    And all my friends say she left because I acted like napoleon dynamite, (napoleon dynamite), but there's just one thing you see I wish it could go back to just her and me
    Because I love that girl unconditionally,
    And its times like this I hope she still thinks of me, (thinks of me)

    And without her its darker than a dim light,
    So this has to be the night, the night I act like mr right,
    The love I have for her is killing me, need proof just take one hard look at me.
    Wish I new what I could do, (yeah I wish I new what I could do)

    Now she walks in still the pretty'est girl I've ever seen,
    With someone that use to be me, now she don't even look twice at me,
    I swear to god that I could change, but she got that new romance,
    Wish I could just ask for one more dance,
    But..

    (Chorus)
    I think that she found a new mr right, right, (mr right, right)
    And all my friends say she left because I acted like napoleon dynamite, (napoleon dynamite), but there's just one thing you see I wish it could go back to just her and me
    Because I love that girl unconditionally,
    And its times like this I hope she still thinks of me, (thinks of me)
  • Oct 24, 2008, 12:56 AM
    Clough

    Hi, nathan08!

    I did respond to you on one of the threads that you started. The link to it is below. Am wondering why you didn't respond to me?

    Thanks!

    https://www.askmehelpdesk.com/music/...te-271943.html

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