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  • Oct 22, 2008, 09:39 AM
    busy ladies
    Thank you clough!
    Clough-
    I received your answers to my last questions, Thank you very much it was very helpful! I just needed some help on how to word my ads? Again, I have a home and commercial cleaning business. Also, what is the product that will take soap scum off showers? Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you soon!:)
  • Oct 23, 2008, 02:17 AM
    Clough

    Hi, busy ladies!

    I know that we've already covered the topic of where to advertise. Now, you're asking the question, separately from the other thread, as to how you would word your ads. That's good!

    If you post here on this same thread, how you might word an ad, without putting any contact information in it, I can help you to develop how it could be worded the best.

    I already know that you operate out of the Omaha, Nebraska area.

    Thanks!
  • Oct 23, 2008, 05:27 PM
    busy ladies

    Clough-
    This is what I normaly use to do my advertising. I know I can do better just not sure what to say to make it different from all the others. I know you can help me. Thank you!

    Let me help you with your home cleaning needs!

    10+ Years experience in cleaning homes, offices, new construction and apartments.

    We offer competitive pricing, call us with the prices of any other cleaning service and we will beat their pricing by 10 percent!

    Weekly, biweekly or monthly cleaning available.

    **FULLY INSURED AND BONDED**
  • Oct 24, 2008, 01:19 AM
    Clough
    Here is a suggested re-write of your ad. You are trying to beat the competition your area and also trying to draw more attention to yourself. I used the following words in a search. Cleaning Service Omaha, NE The results for that can be found via clicking on the following link. Cleaning Service Omaha, NE - Google Search By seeing how others word their ads, you can use some of the same words, phrases and sentences to beat them without infringing on them in any way, as long as you don't use the actual name of their business.

    Title to Use: Cleaning Service, Omaha, Nebraska
    And/or: House Cleaning Service, Omaha, Nebraska
    And/or: Maid Services in Omaha, Nebraska
    And/or: Housekeeping Service in Omaha, Nebraska

    A full-service residential and commercial cleaning service serving the Omaha, NE and surrounding areas.

    Let us help you with your cleaning needs whether it be for you business or home!

    We have 10+ Years experience in cleaning homes, offices, new construction and apartments and we offer competitive pricing. If you let us know what you're presently paying for this type of service, we'll beat their price by 10 percent!

    Flexible schedules are offered by us to meet your needs the best.

    Please call [your name, name of business] at [phone number], or email us at [email address] to set an appointment to discuss how we might be of service to you.

    **FULLY INSURED AND BONDED**

    Keywords to use at the bottom of your ads: Omaha Janitorial Service, Omaha Janitor Supplies, Maid Services for Omaha, Omaha Maid Service, Sparkling Clean in Omaha, Kitchen and Bath Cleaning in Omaha, Janitor Service Serving the Greater Omaha Area, Housekeeping Service Omaha, NE
  • Dec 28, 2010, 12:07 PM
    allyyyy17878
    Comment on Clough's post
    Clough- I need help!

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