Can u please do me a favor?
Can you tell me what you think about this poem?


To All You People
To all you people you think I’m obsessed
Im not, not for awhile now.
To all you people who think I’m in love
I was, but finally realized the truth.
To all you people who thought I hated his girlfriend
You were wrong, I could never hate her.
To all you people who think I still have feelings for him
Not no more, I finally let them go.
To all you people who think I’m giving up
Your right, and that I don’t need to explain.

Honestly, it sounds like you're lying to yourself.

You are obsessed
You are in love
You do hate his girlfriend
You do still have feelings for him
You are trying to let go but just can't quite do it yet.

However, I think you were telling the truth on the last part; You are giving up.

And you might be a man.

I'm not trying to be overly critical but I figured you would appreciate some honest feedback.

To tell you the truth, I think you are trying what I do when I can't actually get over someone, I can''t, so I pretend to by saying I am to myself, in my poetry, in my emails, in my diary, to other people, to the person worth getting over. You are in,, Love? No not love more like 'lust' but it was a good poem at that! Still in denial though>

It's very good, well thought out.