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  • Apr 5, 2008, 12:41 PM
    ProFane
    How is my rap?
    I'm 16 and I'm english. How is my rap.
    Im metaphysical systematically lyrical, on this microphone I'm like jesus bringin a miracle
    Im a radical hanibal cannibal animaltyrannical puritanical who is lyrically mechanical
    In my brain there's 2 much traffic I'm a manic I'm an antic
    This I'm spittin its magic it's a classic, bring your hole army ill attack it, grab your head and ill crack it. I eat up microphones when I'm frantic, its tragic, if you push out your chest ill stab it plastic and your torso ill mash it
    I use napalm to bring harm, break arms 2 set off alarms
    Right down a lyric and spit it and add another gimmick, finf the window of a critic and brick it, bring your click and ill get rid of it
    My life has been corrupt since the day I was born, I'm surprised I haven't grown my own tail and my own horns, with a pitckfork and only being able 2 out at dawn
    Ill tell you my life story but if you disresect me 4 it u'll get floored
    Everyday I've had to be prepared to be quick witted, pull some courage out of nowhere and get equipped with it
    Because these haters create sum aim it my way and fling it, but I've always shouted at the top of my lungs bring it.
  • Apr 5, 2008, 01:33 PM
    KD33
    Wow well written I and my sister like it. You should put it to a recording studio.
  • Apr 5, 2008, 02:19 PM
    hauser5
    I like it, but just be careful about posting your rhymes, if they are good, people will steal them. It is a compliment to be stolen from, but it is better to record, copyright, and then see what people think! If already copyrighted, disregard this message. Keep us posted on this!

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