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  • Mar 23, 2008, 06:43 AM
    frangipanis
    God's lacework
    The moon and stars are set like jewels upon god's lacework,
    Flowing ever so softly
    And eternally.



    Feel free to add to this, as I rarely get past a few lines... :p
  • Mar 23, 2008, 06:51 AM
    frangipanis
    I'm not especially religious, although I believe there is a great mystery to this universe and am happy for it to remain that way...
  • Mar 24, 2008, 02:07 AM
    Clough
    Hello, frangipanis!

    I haven't forgotten about you! I just got really busy.

    A continuance for you from me might be:

    Quote:

    Originally Posted by frangipanis
    The moon and stars are set like jewels upon god's lacework,
    Flowing ever so softly
    And eternally.
    As such, for the sake of eternity, we must be careful in the handling of god's lacework,
    It is very old and yet sturdy
    And has withstood the test of time
  • Mar 24, 2008, 03:38 AM
    frangipanis
    the moon and stars are set like jewels upon god's lacework,
    flowing ever so softly
    and eternally.

    as such, for the sake of eternity, we must be careful in the handling of god's lacework,
    it is very old and yet sturdy
    and has withstood the test of time


    Thanks for that Clough! Those are beautiful sentiments.

    Have you heard of cento poetry? It is where lines are taken from poems to create a new 'patched together' poem. I thought I also read at some time that it's where two or more people take turns in adding lines to a poem. I really like this idea.
    Cento - A Stitched Together Poem « Argot

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