I'm not thorough in english literature.. so can any one help me rewrite this

"tryn' to revert you back when im precious ..not hang on you when im null"


Like I need you back when I'm strong not to hang on you when I'm weak.. something like this.. I want it in good english or maybe in literature.. I'm serious :rolleyes:

Yet another idea ? ;\\

Hm... Can't quite understand what you are asking. Specify?

It could be to do with something about being a burden to someone? (null: nothing)
And the person wanting who they are referring to to remember them when they were precious?

This is not my purpose I know what it mean , I did write it but I feel it's a bad english
Plus you now confirm this to me ;\ damn

My friend leave her lover because he feels so unlike with weak personality.. so he choose to leave her this time but not forever , until he end some exams and maybe to fix his psychological problim..

So he want to write a sentence to announce her that " i love you i'll back to you but not now "..

Amm..

You are too precious to be with me now. Because I don't want to hurt you, I will return to you, my love, when I have figured myself out.

Waw anon699.. that's better thanks pro :))

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Originally Posted by Mumu

waw anon699 .. that's better thanks pro :))

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You're welcome. It's not the best but I tried.