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  • Aug 6, 2007, 12:58 PM
    risingup
    What do you think?
    The sound of iron hands
    Clanging against the ground
    Muffled clarity
    In echoes of crowded streets
    Left behind in the silence of noise
    We question the message
    In fragments of tin matter
    Left swimming on the sidewalks
    In the November rain
    Noise is clarity and clarity noise
    Only now is it clear
    I have known of it all along
  • Sep 6, 2007, 11:54 PM
    Colonel Young
    My department is in prose fiction, but I like and write some free verse. However, the poem itself is rather dry of... clear meaning. The silence of noise? Muffled clarity? Known of "it"... what is "it"? The message?. to put it simply, I might just be tired.

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