VERSE 1 I WROTE IN LIKE 10 MIN NO JOKE.
Like nas one mic is all I need to inject the truth these rappers is scared to feed cause I'm tired of people killing each other over greed adapting into the habitat they say hard to see my spoken words I don’t say um just to say it I say it so you can fell it when the whole world play it waiting for the manifestation to appear you can fell my heart thumping when my words hit the ear writing is fighting what more can I say battlein the tragedies that we facein to day gone with the wind I'm gone to the end my rhymes got you leanin to the left like you sippin on jinn ask him the words that I spit are so incredible unforgettable in hale it and just let it go A master mind so I master time with master rhymes that Webster couldn’t even define a definite cycle is how I choose my direction an internal reflection I do it with perfection creativity is in to me defeatin my enemy with a vicious raft it hurt me soul but my name isn't Lupe and who he try 2 stop what I appeal I destroy in one line cause I am what’s real and that’s REAL.
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Good work! I like it! I hope that you don't mind, but I just "tweaked" it a bit so that it makes more sense and put it into a form where it makes more sense to fit into a rhythm. Keep practicing. You do have good ideas for writing lyrics! I hope that you show this kind of writing to a music teacher at your school, if you have one there. I am a professional musician and have also been a teacher of music for many years.

Where I have placed a couple of underscore lines linked together, ( __ ) are possible places where you could take a pause.

Like just one mic is all I need __
To inject the truth __
These rappers scared to feed __
Cause I'm tired of people killin' others over greed __
Adapting into habitat they say hard to see __

My spoken words __
I don't say 'em __
Just to say 'em __
I say it so you can feel it __
When the whole world plays it __
Waitin' for the manifestation __
To appear __

You can feel my heart thumpin' __
When my words hit the ear __
Writin's like fightin' __
What more can I say? __
Battlin' tragedies that we facin' to day __

Gone with the wind __
I'm gone to the end __

My rhymes got you __
Leanin' to the left __
Like you sippin" on gin __
Ask him if the words I spit are so incredible, unforgettable?

Inhale it, and just let it go __
A master mind, so I master time __
With master rhymes __
That Webster could'n define __

A defnit cycle __
Is how I choose direction __
An internal reflection __
I do it with perfection __

Creativity is in to me __
Defeatin' my enemy __
With a vicious raft __
It hurt my soul __

But my name ain't Lupe __
And he who try 2 stop __
What I appeal __
I destroy in one line __
Cause I am what's real __
And that is what is REAL!

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Originally Posted by thetruth

VERSE 1 I WROTE IN LIKE 10 MIN NO JOKE.
Like nas one mic is all I need to inject the truth these rappers is scared to feed cause im tired of people killing each other over greed adapting into the habitat they say hard to see my spoken words I don’t say um just to say it I say it so u can fell it when the whole world play it waitin for the manifestation to appear u can fell my heart thumping when my words hit the ear writing is fighting what more can I say battlein the tragedies that we facein to day gone with the wind im gone to the end my rhymes got u leanin to the left like u sippin on jinn ask him the words that I spit are so incredible unforgettable in hale it and just let it go A master mind so I master time with master rhymes that Webster couldn’t even define a definite cycle is how I choose my direction an internal reflection I do it with perfection creativity is in to me defeatin my enemy with a vicious raft it hurt me soul but my name aint Lupe and who he try 2 stop what I appeal I destroy in one line cause I am what’s real and that’s REAL.
:)

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I like it it roks you should be one of those people who rite lyrics for a living for famus bands

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Originally Posted by thetruth

VERSE 1 I WROTE IN LIKE 10 MIN NO JOKE.
Like nas one mic is all I need to inject the truth these rappers is scared to feed cause im tired of people killing each other over greed adapting into the habitat they say hard to see my spoken words I don’t say um just to say it I say it so u can fell it when the whole world play it waitin for the manifestation to appear u can fell my heart thumping when my words hit the ear writing is fighting what more can I say battlein the tragedies that we facein to day gone with the wind im gone to the end my rhymes got u leanin to the left like u sippin on jinn ask him the words that I spit are so incredible unforgettable in hale it and just let it go A master mind so I master time with master rhymes that Webster couldn’t even define a definite cycle is how I choose my direction an internal reflection I do it with perfection creativity is in to me defeatin my enemy with a vicious raft it hurt me soul but my name aint Lupe and who he try 2 stop what I appeal I destroy in one line cause I am what’s real and that’s REAL.
:)

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I like it it roks you should be one of those people who rite lyrics for a living for famus bands