And I don't think they're very good. Could people please read them and tell me if they are good? I appreciate any constructive criticism but if your one of those people who just like to insult other peoples work and be mean then don't even bother to read my poem or anser and tell me if it is good or not.
A Doomed Friendship
All I can do is think about you and your wonderful traits
Like the way you make me laugh which always feels great
The way your eyes shine when you face the light
Being around you just feels so right
The way your hair glistens in the sun
It's different so I always know where to run
I feel like our meeting was an absolute fate
Because we get along and we don't rate
The way your voice is so different from everyone else's
The way you try not to be too selfish
I think of you because it was meant to be
I wish you could just learn to see
The way you smile and can make anyone laugh
If you don't like me it will break my heart in half
But then again if it's not meant to be
Then I will nod OK so solemnly
And I will walk off alone and sad
But then again it won't be so bad
Because we'll still be friends at least I hope
Then there will be no reason to mope
Everything will turn out in the end
But we'll never be the same friends again
We can still talk and stuff like that
But when we're alone we can never just chat
But its OK soon we'll forget
Either that or I'll always regret
I still do now, I should've never told you
But already now our friendship is doomed
I found the answer (and I wish I hadn't)
You finally told me what I wanted to know
But I think I would've been better off not though
Instead I pushed the answer
And I wanted it to be the opposite of what it were
Now I sit here wishing I never told you
Then all this we wouldn't have had to go through
I would've been happy and nothing bad
But instead I ended up sad
I've lost all hope and now I'll never look for the answer
Because if I do all my words will slur
I'll be sad and hurt when I try
So I'll never ask you why
I shall never tell anyone how I feel
So I don't find out if it's fake or real
I found the answer but not the one I liked
So never again will I try so my heart doesn't get spiked
Thanks For Calling
Thanks for calling
As soon as I got done falling
I'm glad you see
How much it means to me
Thanks for caring and being so fun
When I get hurt you always run
Thanks for being a friend and checking on me
When something happens you don't flee
Thanks for calling
After I got done falling
I'm glad you see
How much it means to me
What could've been and what happened instead
I long for the day
When that special person walks my way
And he says I like you
Do u like me too
Then I say
You know it every day
And we'd be
So happy
But it seems that's never going to happen
So I tried on my own and
It didn't work as I planned
He said maybe and left my hand
I was all alone
Sitting in my home
When he called
And I stalled
Now we're just friends
Even to the end
But I wish it worked out
'Cus then I wouldn't have to pout
We talk on the phone and at school
We live by only friendship rules
All I'm still looking for
His answer or the door
But he'll never talk
Instead he just walks
But I mustn't push it or I will get no
So I'll leave it even if I don't want to though
What are true friends?
You will always have some friends that are true
True friends will always love you
But not in the way you would've thought
Don't you remember the happiness they brought
All those days when you were sad
They were there to make you glad
Those happy times you like to talk about
When all of you had to scream and shout
When you do something bad
They always have your back
They always try to help you when you're feeling down
They hate it when you cry or frown
They always stick by you through and through
Every time you're sad they're understanding towards you
So all those friends that are true
Make sure you keep them close to you