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  • Dec 17, 2010, 07:36 AM
    littlecat118
    Business letter about prices?
    I have to write a 400 words business letter as manager of a business firm to a goods manufacturing company about the prices of goods. I need help with the body of this letter.
  • Dec 18, 2010, 02:40 PM
    JDpoconos
    A 400 word business letter may be too long.

    I may be able to offer some suggestions but need more info.
    It seems like this may be a school project? Either way, please let me know

    -what type of business firm you're a manager of?
    -what is the intent of the business letter?
    a) to offer your firms products/services to the goods manufacturing company
    b) to complain, or express concern about the mfr prices
    c) other? Please explain
  • Dec 18, 2010, 02:51 PM
    excon

    Hello l:

    I agree with the above answer.. I'm big on brevity. MY letter would look like this.

    Joe Blow Manufacturing
    123 Anywhere St
    Yourtown, USA

    Dear Sir:

    Please send your price list to the above address.

    Thank you.

    excon

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