So I have to write a poem does this sound OK
Outside you see a happy, cheerful person
But on the inside beholds a different story
You see nobody can tell what she is holding in
All she knows is that she is ready to give in

She just wants to break free from this demon that is eating her away
But it just seems like it wants to stay

She cries herself to sleep at night
Wondering if this is going to be her new life
She knows she needs to be tough and fight
But her heart is becoming weaker and weaker

She goes through life with grief and misery
It’s like a thief robbed her happiness away

She is a fragile lost soul in this world
Feeling trapped and is in need to escape
She looks to god for answers
But feels like he isn’t there

She looks at what is next to her
Debating if she should do it
Maybe it would release the agony?
But only for a short time
She looks at the scars of her past

It is not done yet but I would like to hear your thoughts