Need help to correct my english
Hello everyone
I have just started working at a Turkish international school, and i need an advice to correct this letter i wrote. since i am new i do not want to make mistakes, though its common because here in Turkey, we do not study English in an advanced way.
On to the question: I am trying to explain that this student entered our school but he did not pass any of his courses. I wanted to include that he paid his fees for the school year, and that we offer him a 50% discount because of medical condition that he delivered doctor papers to us. Its just a confirmation letter. I will copy and past what i wrote and i appreciate any help and advice if there should be some changes :)
This letter is to confirm that Mr Bla Bla Bla, although attended his BA Global Management
(Marketing) programme in the academic year 2020/21, failed to pass any of his program
courses.
We also confirm that Mr Bla paid the full tuition fees of $21,000.00
Due to his previous medical condition that had an impact on his studies, we would like to offer
Mr Bla 50% discount for the 2021/2 academic year.
Thanks in advance everyone