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  • Jul 7, 2012, 06:40 AM
    Naveen Agrawal
    Story writing
    I have been given a project to write story on the described seen...
    "the horse stood in hind legs,snorted andburst into a fury of speed that was the loveliest thing i had ever seen." please help me
  • Jul 7, 2012, 07:07 AM
    Wondergirl
    First, let's correct that sentence. It should be:

    The horse stood on hind legs, snorted, and burst into a fury of speed that was the loveliest thing I have ever seen.


    Okay -- well, you could write a romance, a western, or a mystery. You could even go with science fiction or fantasy. That's the first thing you have to decide. So, tell me what kind of a story will this be?
  • Jul 7, 2012, 11:20 AM
    Naveen Agrawal
    Please write the story in any kind as you like... and thanks for your interest in my que.
  • Jul 7, 2012, 11:28 AM
    Wondergirl
    No, no, no. This is YOUR story, not mine. I was trying to help. If you expect me to do all the work, I will no longer help.
  • Jul 7, 2012, 11:53 AM
    Naveen Agrawal
    I am sorry... please write it as a romantic story... I need your help.. please
  • Jul 7, 2012, 11:56 AM
    Wondergirl
    I will not write your story. YOU will write your story.

    You need a male and a female for your story. What are their names?
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:00 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    Let their names to be Heer and Ranjha.
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:04 PM
    Wondergirl
    Which one owns the horse? Is that person riding it?
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:08 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    I am an INDIAN boy aged 17 yrs. If I will make any mistake please forgive me.. . may I ask you a que.? Please don't be angery... what should I call u??
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:10 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    I think Heer, the female owns the horse...
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:11 PM
    Wondergirl
    Call me WG (short for Wondergirl).

    So what about my questions?

    Is it nighttime in India? Should you be in bed?
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:16 PM
    Wondergirl
    The horse stood on hind legs, snorted, and burst into a fury of speed that was the loveliest thing I have ever seen. Heer hung on tightly with her arms around the horse's neck. Her beautiful long hair blew free in the wind behind her.

    Ranjha is watching all this. He falls instantly in love. What does he like about Heer and about what he sees?
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:18 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    Yes WG I should to be in bed... but I can stay here for some more time with u...
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:21 PM
    Wondergirl
    When is this due?

    For homeschooling? Or ESL class?

    Go to bed, I am always here.
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:21 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    He likes her eyes...
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:23 PM
    Wondergirl
    But she is riding fast on a horse and he cannot see her eyes. Or did he see her earlier somewhere?
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:25 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    Acctuly this project is for my friend... he have to deposit it Monday... i.e. after 2 days...
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:26 PM
    Wondergirl
    So why are we doing your friend's work for him? Are his arms broken?
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:27 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    He saw her earlier in a garden, plucking flowers...
  • Jul 7, 2012, 12:30 PM
    Naveen Agrawal
    No, no. he is not intrested in this... he said about this... I felt that I'm intrested in this so I am doing it for him or say for my interest...

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