Can someone help me correct this
In life we tend to love the things we find ourselves doing in our spare time or when we’re bored. Most people have a hobby or interest that serves that specific purpose in their life, one that ensures a relaxing past-time. A hobby, an activity done regularly in one’s leisure time for pleasure. Is a great thing to have. My hobbies include watching scary movies, listening to music and sleeping. As times change and faces grow older we seem to find that things that we once enjoyed doing, were just a phase and now our interests have changed in a way And we want to travel around the world, meet different people , interact with new personalities, and also learn how to use new technology, these are all things that I would like to learn and seek more information about. We live in a world where your opinions and beliefs still get criticized. Although others criticized you for your own thoughts, they are still your own voiced opinions. For example I may believe self love and happiness is the key to a stress free life, you on the other hand may disagree. Your belief is that money is the only thing help you to be stress free. Then you began to get criticized just because you basically believe money is better than happiness. All you did was voiced your opinion, it shouldn’t matter what other people think because it’s your beliefs not there’s.