Which tagline below is best for my cleaning service name? True sparkle cleaning services...
The other sparkle is In your eye
It's all we leave behind
We stand behind our sparkle
The sparkle to count on
Our name is our promise
We outsparkle the rest
We dazzle your world

You didn't like the ones I had given you?

Pick one and get busy with this company. I'll be dead and long gone before you even get started.

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Originally Posted by Wondergirl

You didn't like the ones I had given you?

Pick one and get busy with this company. I'll be dead and long gone before you even get started.

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:) how come no one else replies?

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Originally Posted by Abc321ab

:) how come no one else replies?

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Probably because no one else cares.

Don't use the "that's all we leave behind" one. That sounds like you will steal everything not nailed down.

"Sparkle in your eye" usually refers to a baby or getting pregnant.

"Our name is our promise" sounds like the tagline of some other (famous) company.

Maybe "We outsparkle the rest."

PICK ONE and get moving with this company!!!!!

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Originally Posted by Wondergirl

Probably because no one else cares.

Don't use the "that's all we leave behind" one. That sounds like you will steal everything not nailed down.

"Sparkle in your eye" usually refers to a baby or getting pregnant.

"Our name is our promise" sounds like the tagline of some other (famous) company.

Maybe "We outsparkle the rest."

PICK ONE and get moving with this company!!!!!

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Did that one sound good to you? Short and to the point

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Originally Posted by Abc321ab

Did that one sound good to you? Short and to the point

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It's better than the others.

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Originally Posted by Wondergirl

It's better than the others.

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Thank you wonderfirl

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Originally Posted by Abc321ab

Thank you wonderfirl

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Be sure to spell everything correctly. :(

:)

I'll reply: I don't like any of them. I like your company name for the image, but then it's time to get down to business. Enough with the cute stuff. Just say 'Commercial and residential cleaning'
That answers one important question immediately.
Then another line under that covering all keywords that might be relevant, such as green products, 24/7 availability, etc.

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Originally Posted by joypulv

I'll reply: I don't like any of them. I like your company name for the image, but then it's time to get down to business. Enough with the cute stuff. Just say 'Commercial and residential cleaning'
That answers one important question immediately.
Then another line under that covering all keywords that might be relevant, such as green products, 24/7 availability, etc.

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Seems like he's been asking for a company name idea and then a tagline idea for months now. Had he gotten down to business right away, he could have been a millionaire by now.

Like me, with the working title for my novel.
Maybe not rich but famous?

I always liked the story of how Emma Peal got her name in the Avengers: the working name was M. Appeal.