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  • Aug 30, 2012, 02:32 AM
    Lullu_1
    How to ask for a meeting by email with manager
    Hello,

    I got an offer to come for an interview to take the inter position at the company.
    Unfortunate I hade to change time and date they offered me, and I got a replay from the person I will be meeting with yesterday- 'Thatís fine. Please get in touch upon your return and let me know when you are available.'

    I want to inform her that I can come to meet her on Wednesday, here is some draft I prepared :
    Hello,
    I am writing to ask if you have time to meet with me on September 5th or 6th. Please let me know what time and date suites you the best?

    Could you please tell me if it's correct enough or I have to change something! Thank you very much
  • Aug 30, 2012, 04:43 AM
    JudyKayTee
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Lullu_1 View Post
    Hello,

    I got an offer to come for an interview to take the inter position at the company.
    Unfortunate i hade to change time and date they offered me, and i got a replay from the person i will be meeting with yesterday- 'Thatís fine. Please get in touch upon your return and let me know when you are available.'

    I want to inform her that i can come to meet her on Wednesday, here is some draft i prepared :
    Hello,
    I am writing to ask if you have time to meet with me on September 5th or 6th. Please let me know what time and date suites you the best?

    Could you please tell me if it's correct enough or i have to change something! Thank you very much

    Where is this? What Country? I'd be 100% certain that you run spell check.

    I have no idea how casual your previous communication has been. With that in mind I would change it to "If so, WHICH date and WHAT time best fit into your schedule."

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