Tut, sorry buddy but it's really annoying to have one's style analyzed, rhetorical devices described and told the alleged fallacy of one's argument instead of just discussing the point.
You do realize this bill addresses another law so the final regulation is not in evidence yet. So the argument at the moment is on the bill as it stands. That's the point of publicizing now it so such idiotic provisions are made known
BEFORE it becomes law.
It "deletes" exclusions from the current law. It
specifically adds coverage to babysitters over the age of 18 (which NK pointed out) that are not family members - a point which was
conceded in my OP on the bill by the author of the article - "unless it is a family member." I have been 100 percent right on the facts from the beginning.