I will send a copy to you once completed. Life_Coach.

Why not call the dragon Draco, and instead of putting everything into one book, have a trilogy with the first one being " Dandy: The Beginning, then Dandy: The Revenge,and finally Dandy: The Final Battle.

Thanks Mysteryperson, hey and don't let any peoples negative responses get to you,instead use it as a stepping stone to getting closer to your goal.

Wishing you all the best.

Thank you Life_Coach. Lady Emily. I like the idea of a Trilogy and I was thinking that the dragon would probably slip away at the last minute then there would be some kind of sequel with the further adventures of Dandy in it.

Anyone got any ideas on a name?
Anyone?
Does anyone think it is a bad idea to introduce another shape shifter?
I've improved my book, there is about an extra page around the bit where Dandy and George meet the pack and there are about five pages added to the end.
I don't know why I bother writing on this topic, nobody answers.

Any ideas for a name?
Anyone have critism on my work?
Anyone have some praise for me?
Anyone?
Anyone?
No one?

The book now has a name
It is called
Two Souled.