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  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:55 PM
    Wondergirl
    Why didn't the barber kill the captain? Two reasons.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:56 PM
    hi15789
    Yes.

    So my theme is "it takes courage to stand up to an enemy" how would I write a thesis statement about this? I am currently stuck on this. Need help.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:57 PM
    hi15789
    The barber did not killed him because he thought about his future. If he had killed him he would have to start a new life by leaving the city and going to another town. He would also lose his respect
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:58 PM
    Wondergirl
    Slow down. We have to do this the right way, or you will never be able to put together a thesis statement.

    Why didn't the barber kill the captain? -- two reasons.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:59 PM
    Wondergirl
    That's one reason --the barber knew he would never get away with it, would be killed by the captain's soldiers.

    What's the main reason the barber didn't kill the captain?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:00 PM
    hi15789
    - He did not want to leave his town
    - if he did leave town the town people would follow him and follow him
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:01 PM
    Wondergirl
    No, no, no.

    What is the main reason the barber did not kill the captain?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:02 PM
    hi15789
    Plus the barber mentioned that " i perform my work honorably.... I dont want blood on my hands"
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:04 PM
    Wondergirl
    Sooooooooooooooo, the barber did not kill him because...
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:05 PM
    hi15789
    He did not want blood on his hand and he perform his work honorably
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:05 PM
    Wondergirl
    "You came to me for a shave. ... I am only a barber."
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:06 PM
    hi15789
    He does not want blood on his hands --------------No. HE IS A BARBER, AND A VERY GOOD BARBER!
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:06 PM
    Wondergirl
    Now for the theme -- "the courage to stand up to an enemy"

    Who is the enemy?

    Who stood up to his enemy?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:07 PM
    hi15789
    That's why he did not kill the captain
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:08 PM
    hi15789
    The enemy is the captain

    The barber had courage standing against him
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:10 PM
    Wondergirl
    Was the barber the captain's enemy and could have killed him, but didn't?

    There are TWO enemies.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:11 PM
    hi15789
    Yes barber enemy is the captain

    There is only 1 enemy
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:12 PM
    Wondergirl
    There are TWO enemies.

    The captain is the barber's enemy.

    The barber is the captain's enemy.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:13 PM
    hi15789
    Only one

    The barber is the captain's enemy
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:14 PM
    Wondergirl
    TWO. Otherwise, the story makes no sense.

    barber's enemy = captain

    captain's enemy = barber

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