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  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:55 PM
    Wondergirl
    Why didn't the barber kill the captain? Two reasons.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:56 PM
    hi15789
    Yes.

    So my theme is "it takes courage to stand up to an enemy" how would I write a thesis statement about this? I am currently stuck on this. Need help.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:57 PM
    hi15789
    The barber did not killed him because he thought about his future. If he had killed him he would have to start a new life by leaving the city and going to another town. He would also lose his respect
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:58 PM
    Wondergirl
    Slow down. We have to do this the right way, or you will never be able to put together a thesis statement.

    Why didn't the barber kill the captain? -- two reasons.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 09:59 PM
    Wondergirl
    That's one reason --the barber knew he would never get away with it, would be killed by the captain's soldiers.

    What's the main reason the barber didn't kill the captain?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:00 PM
    hi15789
    - He did not want to leave his town
    - if he did leave town the town people would follow him and follow him
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:01 PM
    Wondergirl
    No, no, no.

    What is the main reason the barber did not kill the captain?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:02 PM
    hi15789
    Plus the barber mentioned that " i perform my work honorably.... I dont want blood on my hands"
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:04 PM
    Wondergirl
    Sooooooooooooooo, the barber did not kill him because...
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:05 PM
    hi15789
    He did not want blood on his hand and he perform his work honorably
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:05 PM
    Wondergirl
    "You came to me for a shave. ... I am only a barber."
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:06 PM
    hi15789
    He does not want blood on his hands --------------No. HE IS A BARBER, AND A VERY GOOD BARBER!
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:06 PM
    Wondergirl
    Now for the theme -- "the courage to stand up to an enemy"

    Who is the enemy?

    Who stood up to his enemy?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:07 PM
    hi15789
    That's why he did not kill the captain
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:08 PM
    hi15789
    The enemy is the captain

    The barber had courage standing against him
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:10 PM
    Wondergirl
    Was the barber the captain's enemy and could have killed him, but didn't?

    There are TWO enemies.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:11 PM
    hi15789
    Yes barber enemy is the captain

    There is only 1 enemy
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:12 PM
    Wondergirl
    There are TWO enemies.

    The captain is the barber's enemy.

    The barber is the captain's enemy.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:13 PM
    hi15789
    Only one

    The barber is the captain's enemy
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:14 PM
    Wondergirl
    TWO. Otherwise, the story makes no sense.

    barber's enemy = captain

    captain's enemy = barber
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:14 PM
    hi15789
    Yes two enemies, my bad
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:18 PM
    Wondergirl
    So, the theme -- "the courage to stand up to an enemy" -- the barber stood up to the captain, and the captain stood up to the barber.

    The captain had the courage to sit in the barber chair and allow his enemy to use a very sharp razor around his throat to shave him.

    The barber had the courage to allow his enemy to sit in his chair and then to shave him without killing him -- and that took more courage to NOT kill him than it would to kill him.

    Are you with me, or not?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:20 PM
    hi15789
    Yes
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:26 PM
    Wondergirl
    Can you write a thesis statement now?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:26 PM
    hi15789
    I think so, but I'm still stuck
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:27 PM
    Wondergirl
    It's is all but written for you. What on earth are you stuck on?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:30 PM
    hi15789
    Is this good

    In Hernado Tellez Just Lather, that's all, the captain Torres had the courage to sit on a barbers chair and allow his enemy to use a ver sharp razor to shave around his throat.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:31 PM
    Wondergirl
    No, that is not a thesis statement. It is a statement of fact.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:32 PM
    Wondergirl
    A thesis statement is the main idea that you are trying to convey in your work. It states plainly what you are trying to persuade your readers to believe. Therefore, a thesis cannot be a simple statement of fact, because a statement of fact does not require persuasive argument.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:33 PM
    hi15789
    I have got it

    Thank You for your help
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:34 PM
    Wondergirl
    What is your thesis statement?
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:37 PM
    hi15789
    Risking your life takes a lot of courage to sit on the enemys chair
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:38 PM
    Wondergirl
    There are TWO enemies!!
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:40 PM
    Wondergirl
    Everything you need for a good thesis statement is in this box (from posts we have made in this thread) --

    A thesis statement requires argument and support. It states plainly what you are trying to persuade your readers to believe.

    What do you want your readers to believe?

    So, the theme -- "the courage to stand up to an enemy" -- the barber stood up to the captain, and the captain stood up to the barber.

    The captain had the courage to sit in the barber chair and allow his enemy to use a very sharp razor around his throat to shave him.

    The barber had the courage to allow his enemy to sit in his chair and then to shave him without killing him -- and that took more courage to NOT kill him than it would to kill him.
  • Jul 12, 2012, 10:43 PM
    hi15789
    Thanks
  • Jul 13, 2012, 06:41 AM
    Wondergirl
    And thank you for so patiently working with me on this. I hope you come up with a good thesis statement.

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