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    David Kim Posts: 3, Reputation: 1
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    Apr 22, 2012, 08:27 PM
    Please checkmy grammar!
    Hello!
    I enjoyed your response and actually, I agree your opinion. Also, you gave to good example. I like watch television and I always watch television every night. I think that television is not helpful for me because if I watch television, had a numbing effect on my mind. So, it’s not helpful for me. It’s like a drug something.

    Thanks.


    Hello!
    Fist of all, I am really congratulations your good news.
    I can understand your situation. I was also same to situation as like you but I also heard good news. Actually, I like your quote ““those words inscribed on the ring are not telling you that you should not enjoy the good in your life, nor are they merely meant to provide some comfort in times of suffering. They have a deeper purpose: to make you aware of the fleetingness of every situation, which is due to the transience of all forms-good or bad.” (Tolle, 225) “ I know that you are suffering from something as like study, grade, or etc.. But I am sure that you will overcome and finally, you will get the your goal.
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    Hello!
    While I read your response, I really enjoyed it and I also agree your opiion. Actually, I like your quote ““Discover inner space by creating gaps in the stream of thinking. Without those gaps, your thinking becomes repetitive, uninspired, devoid of any creative spark, which is how it still is for most people on the planet (243).” Actually, it is difficult find inner spaace but we try to find inner space.
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    Wondergirl Posts: 39,354, Reputation: 5431
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    Apr 22, 2012, 08:31 PM
    What is this? A school assignment? It is very poor English.

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